yelowcow's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Primal War 10]

so distorted

I'm guessing this series has gotten so much attention because there has obviously been a lot of work put into it. Given that i still dont understand what you are doing with your animation and drawings. 70 percent of the time it looks like you drew some thing, and went into the transform mode and forgot to hold shift to constrain proportions or some thing. PLEASE STOP! i dont know why you are doing it, and letting it get distorted, but what you are doing to it now makes it look so bad. There is no way you are drawing them like that, i dont see any reason why you would want things to be twice as wide as they should be and distorted.
As far as just for this episode, im not really into chicks that are half lion, so her big boobs and ass just kind of made me uncomfortable.

RickMarin responds:

I ll fix that problem

[Magic Crack Rocks]

a Japanese anime...

with british voices counter-strike sounds rap music and a corny as hell plot line. BODACIOUS DUDE! you obviously have some talent in drawing, although i am not a fan of anime and i think it is way over done. Work on your script writing, and get some real sound effects. And the rap music dude? I mean come on.

[Upstairs]

very well made

i thought in particular the style was very cool, some of it seems a little too repetitive, i think you could of put in acouple more interesting shots of some sort to kind of mix it up but no matter what it was very well made. However i didnt get what that whole thing with the girl was about.

any way gj, interested to see what else you dish out.

[Zomborg Apocalypse - 006]

its hard

not to make fun of you.

[My Goats Like To Travel 2]

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I'm pretty sure i wouldnt find this funny even if i was a liberal

[The Run.]

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Atleast he became skinny

[Billy's Big Day]

looks like you put alot of hard work into this

and eventualy it will pay off. Considering you are 13 i think this is really good and that you show alot of promise but it really wasnt very funny. i understand it is soposed to be "retarded funny" or some thing like that but you need to work on it a bit for it to work right, otherwise its just retarded with out the funny. Dont get offended by peoples reviews, especialy on newgrounds people are imature and dont know how to give constructive criticism, which is some thing i hope you know how to take. The animation although a little weird looked better than much of the stuff on new grounds, but maybe in the future consider getting into more of the frame by frame stuff. More importantly i would say work on the story and the humor. Im sure that you and your friends found it funny, and i can see the style you are going for but try to find some one a little older to show your script or what ever to just to try and get a differn perspective. any way im rambling. GJ and keep on spitting them out

[Cupid's Last Stand]

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I am just glad that i wasnt, and i didnt have any children in your class when you were a school teacher.

your animation skills are very good though.

[Xombie: Chapter 7]

well made

a good amount of work has been put into this. only problem is why you have to have a pw to use the scene selection. very dumb, cause no one is going to write down the password once the watch the whole thing, and if they had to close it in the middle or some thing for some reason no way to skip through to the part they were watching. it doesnt serve any real purpose i can see. other than that all is good.

[PALADIN episode 4]

you are deffinitly improving

this animation compared to the first ones is amazing in terms of the graphics. You might of gone a little overboard on some of the scenes if on low quality i was still getting major fps spikes even in spots that it didnt seem like any thing that special was going on.

I think you need to work on your script writing a little bit, that is where i think you are weakest. the whole thing is kind of a cleache ( i know i cant spell) with alittle originality thrown in there every once in a while. The dialog was a bit corny as well, even when it didnt seem as though it was meaning to be.

any way over a good job. also consider buying a better mic or not talking so close to it or some thing.